Marked Zahra's Blog. It was nice colorful and it had really good layout and good context. She met the criteria very well and did a great job and she got a 5 which is very good and she accomplished most of the requirements.
Strengths:She had customised her blog really well, she also put lots of effort in most of her work and she a quite a good grammar and her video is also very entertaining.
Weaknesses: She could say a liitle bit more about who she is because she didn't meet the requirements for that well and she could make it more detailed.
Improvements
Although she did a great job. She could do much better so I think her improvements should be that to put some more effort in her work because it didn't look very good, like the font could have been better and make it more nice, make it more detailed so the reader understands better and last of all reflect on what she does more often to see what she could improve.
Overall, I think her Blog is very good and nice and if she fixes her improvements it would be perfect.
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